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Works In Progress - The Quiet Man
Okay, I'm just trying out a few things, and I haven't quite got permission yet (She said that it was Okay!), but here is my version of chapter 1 of The Quiet Man by IvyBlossom which I really like.
If you have a moment, please tell me:
1) Did the player work?
2) Anything that you notice that I need to work on?
For example, my h said that he could not tell who is talking. I suppose that I need to find a way to distinguish John's voice from his therapist. So I'm trying to think up a John voice.
I'm using the technique of talking closer to the microphone when he thinks (close miked) and further away when he talks.
Any more comments?
Work in Progress: The Quiet Man Chapter 1 - Forty three minutes
If you have a moment, please tell me:
1) Did the player work?
2) Anything that you notice that I need to work on?
For example, my h said that he could not tell who is talking. I suppose that I need to find a way to distinguish John's voice from his therapist. So I'm trying to think up a John voice.
I'm using the technique of talking closer to the microphone when he thinks (close miked) and further away when he talks.
Any more comments?
Work in Progress: The Quiet Man Chapter 1 - Forty three minutes